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Thursday, November 16, 2017

MY silent writing

 One day there was a boy called Pablo he was a boy who liked to adventure. Pablo is an only child he lives with his mum. his parents aren’t together he is always going places. because he has his dad’s to go his dad and mum’s place he goes to the beach and hiking and all types of places. he goes in tow a lot of the time with his dad   he goes and eats ice cream with his dad. his dad’s job is a painter his mum is a lawyer one night Pablo left his room and he went to carnival and he went to a concert and now it is seven in the morning he went back home he lost his dad last night he went to a bar and got stabbed in back his mum i  sat work and he’s going take care of Pablo but they don’t know he got stabbed  the mum called the dad he didn’t pick up the mum goes to the dad’s house and he’s gone the blood is left on the floor that’s when they realise he’s dead the body is still there they were in shock  Pablo had his funeral in the father's favourite place in the world were he never went it was  Christchurch in Nz they left america they stayed in Christchurch for a while then go back to  america and the family and Pablo’s brothers and sisters are very sad and now since Pablo is always thinking about the dad so Pablo is failing school and not going to school and he’s not going to his nerd meeting Pablo is a nerd by the way and all Pablo does now is sit in his room it has been 20 years and Pablo is all grown up and he hasn’t left his house since his dad dying and his mum is 89 years old and he is his mum is out shopping and when the mum comes home she see’s Pablo with a rope around his head dead in the air and the mum did cpr on him he was dead the mum is all alone but she still has her life but the next day the mum had a heart attack then the whole family is dead but as soon as the mum died she got pregnant she died in a supermarket people called the hospital and they said she’s having a baby at 89 years of age the baby was getting born the doctors  held the baby but who was going to raise the baby Pablo’s cousin’s of course but they don’t know that Pablo has cousin’s they don’t even know Pablo but the mum has a photo of Pablo and his cousin’s in a photo and it shows where the cousin’s live the ambulance  rushed to the cousin’s house and the cousin’s took good care of the little girl by the way the baby was a girl 10 years went passed and the cousin’s now passed away the girl has to find a job to get money she was on the streets for a couple of days now she has no job she only has 15 dollar’s she went the supermarket to get food and clothes she didn’t have much money so she didn’t get clothes but she got food and drinks but she found a job for a  hairdresser  she made 20 bucks a hour she got fired after 3 hours she found a job at a supermarket it was her birthday so her friends at the supermarket hosted a party for her so she wasn’t lonely on her birthday her name is Emma she is a 11 now and she as a house with her friends and she has a job what would you need to make money she need’s to go to school the manager said if she does not go to school then she will be fired from the job and then she will be back on the street so she went to school she didn’t get fired which was lucky on her part but on the murderer’s part it was bad the man who is hunting her is the murderer of Pablo’s dad he is wiping out their family slowly he killed the dad he wanted Pablo to kill himself he did the died by old age and a heart attack now he’s going to kill Emma he’s going to kill there family it’s the next day and Emma ate her breakfast and then she goes to school and goes to the supermarket finish’s her shift and goes home and then goes to Mc donalds and eat it at Mc donalds  and then goes home to her friend’s place and watch tv and that’s her day but she went to the supermarket again when she goes to the charger ile a full shelf falls and hits her  she had to get stitches on her toe  and she is still in hospital she got to go from hospital but as soon as she got out of hospital when she goes to her friends place her

1 comment:

  1. Sounds like you put a lot of effort into this writing piece. Next time make sure you check your punctuation and proof read. Another great blog post!

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